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    The poem for the poets that poeticalize perhaps?Will you write some verse here? A

    couplet, or A line? A rhyme? HA! I not only used 20 characters, I used MAX allowed ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^that's so cool Hmm...it looks like I have a lot of punctuation.OMG Sometimes I don't get people; but I like to hang from trees. Sometimes I PULL up daisies and weave them into wreathes. I'm often...
  2. L

    Can you define these words please?

    wistophoric Migolier umbst freffed omgublia beninsy
  3. L

    Will you read a wandering through my streets? C/C?

    When the streets are quiet like this, it makes me wary; I feel WATCHED... Though I move like a cat I could be caught- I think, 'do not forget about the time you stuck a knife in that dudes belly and he LAUGHED Someone coughed, hidden in the shadows; startled, I assume position to defend, but...
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    Is this poem good or BAAD? Do goofy puns count as phrased as a question?

    The Shepard's garb cloaks the sneering sly wolf that takes from those who do not have enough to feed themselves, their children; and ahead is a drop steeply into the bluff. Usurper of righteous causes, beguiler of menial begrudging masses, flattening lines of barely breathing survivors of a...
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    It's no sin! Please coach me on a medium length poem form, and take this dang apple!...

    ...Will you help me? Cause I need discipline in my writing and my main problem is syllable stress.
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    What is the form of this poem called, or is it free verse?

    SONG by John Donne Go and catch a falling star, Get with child a mandrake root, Tell me where all past years are, Or who cleft the devil's foot, Teach me to hear mermaids singing, Or to keep off envy's stinging, And find What wind Serves to advance an honest mind. If thou be'st born to strange...
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    What is the form of this poem called, or is it free verse?

    SONG by John Donne Go and catch a falling star, Get with child a mandrake root, Tell me where all past years are, Or who cleft the devil's foot, Teach me to hear mermaids singing, Or to keep off envy's stinging, And find What wind Serves to advance an honest mind. If thou be'st born to strange...
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    Would you critique this as an impartial and knowledgeable reader of poetry?

    Mother's Milk* She rides across the empty air Between the water and the wind. No stars define the hemisphere, No currents to carry her toward an end. No sun delivers her shadow... She must sustain it coiled within. Eyes darken under dreamless brow; Her face is growing pale and thin. No imprint...
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    Would you critique this as an impartial and knowledgeable reader of poetry?

    Mother's Milk* She rides across the empty air Between the water and the wind. No stars define the hemisphere, No currents to carry her toward an end. No sun delivers her shadow... She must sustain it coiled within. Eyes darken under dreamless brow; Her face is growing pale and thin. No imprint...
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    Gal poets,would you like to come to a party at mah ranch?

    Juice LaSalle is gonna be throwin' abig ol' hoot'nanny at the homestead,and we need morewomen so's there won't be too much fightin' amongst the men. Lucy Magill and Juice are gonna have their hands full. 'Course we won't turn away anyone less'n they got a problem with drinkin' and whoopin' it...
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    This is not a sonnet, but has a son in it, will you c/c?

    I could have spent these past few weeks explaining WHY, but instead I decided to step up, to TRY to make up for lost time. I admit to my crime. I should have been there for my son. I was NOT. All I can say is that I never forgot how his eyes would shine when they looked into mine. Now he's a...
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    Blue Child, you prompted me to repost this. Poets please; will you C/C?

    Bang! Reverberates through the empty, bounces off of the quarks that cloak me. Slam. The door of possibilities shuts. Locked in a chamber with one easy out. Moaning and sighing from long shadows, cast by the Nothingme become of Love. Sad sussuration, a feather in spiral, falling, falling into...
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    This is a new poem that comp?

    will you say some words to stop my catapult into catastrophe? I can choose to not do what they all say is best for me simply because I am very opposed to doing what I'm told. Even if I appear an obstinate and foolish wretch, I'm sold on this new idea that I have been toying with of late: I can...
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    This is a new poem that comp?

    will you say some words to stop my catapult into catastrophe? I can choose to not do what they all say is best for me simply because I am very opposed to doing what I'm told. Even if I appear an obstinate and foolish wretch, I'm sold on this new idea that I have been toying with of late: I can...
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