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Look to nature for your inspiration and poetic elements. Google may be a good idea as well!

I'd say it is neither. I'd class it as a reflection as seen in journals. You purge your anger and settle for joy. If it works, it is time well spent.

You do not NEED the poem. You need counselling.

Ted Hughes Crow poems.

You're stuck in a room with a mirror and a table how do you get out? When you get out you see two doors with a man guarding each door one door leads to fame, fortune, etc. The other a painful death you ask one guard one question but one guard tells only the truth the other only tells lies what...

i have had a ten gallon tank for a few days and waaited like i was supposed to to see if the ph levels were good enough, even though the water was a wierd greenish cloudy color, i took it in to get tested at petsmart. all off the levels were perfectly normal but the water is still cloudy, i...

The heart is metaphorically given human characteristics, so in effect it is both personification and metaphorical writing.

I would change the word object. It is insulting to the one you love and dehumanising. The poem is raw but not self pitying.

Little Ladies Learn Dance The Shirley Temple Dance Camp Camp Locomotion

Little Ladies Learn Dance The Shirley Temple Dance Camp Camp Locomotion

Your art is best described as mixed media abstract pattern style. You work from your hidden eye and see things as patterns. Why you do this, only you know.

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT By Dylan Thomas ( but he was not a fiend! ) Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked...

Why a watch? This reminds one of time...passing...lost ...before coming home. Why not give him a lock of your hair in a card in which you tell him what he means to you? An old idea but one which has meant so much in the past.

This is asking too much of this site. My advice is for you to brainstorm all the images of war you think of. Now write down all the punchy words you can find which describe loss and horror. Select a place and time in which your poem will happen. Create a character or characters who are at this...

Without the copy of the poem it is impossible to answer your question.