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    B&A: I've finally written a short story! What do you think?

    I hate graveyards, and at night they're only worse. When the sun sinks and the moon comes out, Mount Crawford Cemetary is an absolute nightmare. The trees were stripped bare of their leaves in some long-ago winter; now they claw at the black sky with dead branches and boughs. The slippery grass...
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    Which photo do you like best?

    Hi guys :) Wow, it feels weird to be out of B&A... Tell me which one of these photos you like best? No, I'm not fishing for compliments, and this isn't one of those "am i hot or not" questions. I don't really care about that sort of thing, so it's all good :) If you want, here's the backstory...
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    B&A: Rate these characters? Images inclued?

    My three favourite characters :) All are villains, but yeah. There's a love triangle betewen these three - who would you prefer to see Veirra with, personally? (It won't sway the plot, I know what's going to happen and why, but want your opinions). Oh, and of course, rate them and tell me which...
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    The greatest writers in history?

    Hi guys! I'm actually not posting an "excerpt" question for once. For year 11 to year 12, my school orders us to create a project in which we decide what to research, and research it. I'm basically doing mine on the types of characters popular in certain times.I figured the best way to do this...
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    What do you think of my blurb?

    I need a blurb for the back of my second book, which is where the villain begins to justify himself and make the heroine look like the wrongdoer. What do you think of this? "You call me a villain. You spite my name and loathe the ground on which I walk. You look at my followers and draw blades...
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    What do you think of this little romance scene?

    I gotta warn you, this is kind of going to be a little cliche-sounding. Basically, this woman has been trying to help Ananias for years - he's been deep in depression and sought solice in alochol and so on. Now he's pulled himself together. Aandd... ‘I’ve treated you horribly, Deliah,’ he said...
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    B&A: Help me with this attack scene?

    High above us on the mountain, I saw another rush of flame. The hellish firestorm came down upon us then – each ball of fire was little bigger than a dinner-plate at the head, but that wasn’t the point of them. The fireballs were designed to set things alight, not to demolish with force. I...
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    What do you think of my original story idea?

    Alrighty, well, I've posted this before but I've improved it: A long time ago in a galaxy far far away, Parry Hotter goes to Hogpimples School of Watchcraft and Lizardry. His best friends are named Ironman and Optimus Prime. They go through a wardrobe into Narnia and are told to destroy the...
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    B&A: Writers, when you're writing the climax of your story...?

    Do you attack the keyboard? If there's a big fight happening or an argument, I find that my fingers are beating the poor keyboard senseless (which isn't hard, come to think of it) because I'm hitting the keys hard. I guess what I'm asking is, do you get excited when you write the climax of your...
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    Title ideas for my story?

    Oh, I am so against these questions, but I could use some inspiration: Basically, the story is the 4th in a pentalogy. All the others are name, but this one is really irritating me. It's *basically* about people forming alliances and banding together in war, but also has sub-plots of good...
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    What do you think of my writing?

    Quite literally just wrote it then - opinions, critique, etc? http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/K.M.%20Lindsay/651687/ Also: 1) What do you think will happen? 2) What do you think of the characters? 3) How would you feel if the narrator of this part (the narrators change throughout the book)...
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    What do you think of my writing?

    All you really need to know is that - Varlin's the head of this huge gang kind of thing, - Alexia is the leader of an elite force that works for him - The narrator, Leah, is in love with one of Alexia's followers (Laian) Sorry if that's too vague, but I don't want to give away too much :/...
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    What do you think of my writing?

    http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/K.M.%20Lindsay/648156/ Honest opinions?
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    What do you think of my writing?

    http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/K.M.%20Lindsay/648156/ Honest opinions?
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    Ideas for a book cover?

    i write fantasy, and i'm having a lot of trouble coming up with a cover for my second book. ideas would be welcome - or just words that might spark an idea. the book is called Merciless, and centered around the idea of revenge and deceit. it's a war story, part of a series. complexity won't be...
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