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    what do you think of this poem?

    I like it. Tips: -add some metaphores and similes (they make the poem more appealing to your audience) -some of your rhymes don't rhyme so well, you may wish to revise them -check your spelling otherwise it's great.
  2. I

    what do you think of this poem?

    I like it. Tips: -add some metaphores and similes (they make the poem more appealing to your audience) -some of your rhymes don't rhyme so well, you may wish to revise them -check your spelling otherwise it's great.
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