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    Opinions please! What do you think of my poem?

    I've already posted this poem, but i need more opinions. and i know that you dont have to put commas after every line, but i accidentally did it and every first letter is capitialized because it automatically does that on the word program. thanks in advance! I’m left out in the cold, Wanting...
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    Can you rate my poem and edit it?

    this is really good- especially for something written in 1:30 in the morning and since this is your first poem like this! im experimenting writing poems without a certain rhyme and beat also. great job! :) thanks for answering mine! :)
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    What do you think of this poem?

    what do you think of the poem i wrote? i already know that it doesnt need to have all of the commas and also the letter arent supposed to be capitalized, but the word program does it automatically. any opinions and criticism are welcome! thanks in advance! :) I’m walking around in circles Not...
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    Please help me! Need opinions on poem!?

    i already know that the rhyming and structure of it is unpredictable, but what do you think about just the poem itself, and the words? Thanks in advance! Everyone sees a happy girl, on her way to the top of a world, but inside I’m breaking down from the weight of the world on my shoulders they...
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    Don't you think Y!A should have a Harry Potter and a Twilight Section in the...

    YES! i mean, im a major HP and Twilight fan and i have to come to this section and skip all of the questions about everything else to look for twilight and hp related questions. and your right, there are TONS of them. we should make a petition or something. seriously, it would be really helpful-...
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