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    Is this poem enough, or do i need to make it rhyme?

    I’ve often wondered if Christians Are selfish in their view of death? I see it like waiting to cross a busy road One eye on a gap and one on those kids that try to run across, without looking. Sometimes life is like seeing how long you can hold your breath How do know what’s on the other...
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    What world do you live in poets?

    I enjoyed this trip into outer space, however, If you ascend to Olympus Mons you are bound to find Martians there. LOL
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    Re; Jack and Jill- This A.M, seems several poets here are effecting my

    Mr. and Mrs. Fix It went up the hill carrying a tube of super glue, Mr thought it a good idea to fix the leaking Loo Mrs though couldn't wait and had an urgent call twenty seconds later she couldn't move at all She called out loud and clear so her husband and all could hear "better call the...
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    is there a calm after a storm?

    I am of the opinion that the last 4 lines are very powerful and should dictate to the rest of the poem I see your beautiful poem like this:- A sweet respite Let the darkness hide my face while the moon looks upon me Let the clouds obscure the stars in coverlets of lace agree Let it wrap...
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    Will you walk through the garden with me?

    Walking through my garden I observe the tallest trees Mighty and magnificent Like the height of all my dreams I bend to smell the flowers Fragrance they release In nature different colours will draw us unto peace Beneath my feet, the grass That brings a sense of ease Supporting my endeavours...
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    Will you walk through the garden with me?

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    I re- wrote this poem for LP ; Do you think she will like it?

    As I Look Around By Gideon (Dedicated to my friend Kay) I watch as spiders catch their flies With sunlight glistening on their web But also trapping butterflies Exposes all their truths, as Lies Thermals, determine where he goes The Condor circles overhead Below him, there are the flowers Who...
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    Should I go pack now.. my poetry is not appealing to me. It seems dull and

    Before you deep six… I like this piece, it does seem unnecessary “wordy” However, give it a couple of days then come back maybe you may see it in a different light. I’ve been going over the poems I wrote a year ago and I find re – writing quite stimulating while I wait for my muse to return...
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    I wrote this poem for you; Care to comment?

    For you, (Put your name here) By Gideon Like eagles, that soar above the clouds I’ve learned to place my trust, in your words Hearts made to love beyond this life With passions, far beyond human lusts Come to me my love, or strike your blow. Love drives, not considering its plight I have...
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