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It's the beginning of my story, and I'm wondering if it brings you straight into the story, or if it's awfully boring. I would much appreciate constructive criticism and a way to improve. Thank you. Jayden Hall was just eight years old when he ran away from home. The first days of winter had...

I really like fantasy books, and now I'm writing one. But I don't know if the fantasy genre matches the plot. I would really like to add griffins, elves, phoenixes and all those magical creatures, but the story plot already seems fine the way it is. So if I add fantasy, would it be over the top...