Recent content by DAHha

I do my contacts first, then try to do a couple of others a day. Some of us are trying new ways of writing and, I think out of respect for our contacts, we answer our them with good C/C. We all have some of the same, and many different contacts. I have only 50, some of you have 200 or more...

Yup, it counts. Couldn't see the moon for the clouds. I danced in my head to the Beatles as I was drivin though.

I couldn't help pausing after the tenth syllable in some lines. Is that okay? I like your "experiment." This would be iambic hexameter, I think. I just looked it up. Tricky . I like!

I thought Pa had something fishy going on. Where's the green hat?

don't know what to write

Pretty poem my Border Collies Pompous Prima donnas Righteous Rascals Entertaining Entities Tender Tempests Triumphantly True Yowza, yowza,yowza yawn

You've got lots of good answers. It's okay, as long as you credit the author, and yes, it is a critique.

And even in our sleep, pain which cannot forget falls drop by drop upon the heart, and in our own despite, against our will, comes wisdom to us by the awful grace of God.

>>>>huh<<<< wh a ....t.....a re you talk i n bou ****t No edit ^^^ still no shirt no shirt no shoes .....