Its good =] I like it but its just a small thing. At the beginning you say piss which is more slang but the rest of your writing is more 'well spoken' which is good its just that that one sentence couldve been written by someone else. I think you're good though =]
Its good =] I like it but its just a small thing. At the beginning you say piss which is more slang but the rest of your writing is more 'well spoken' which is good its just that that one sentence couldve been written by someone else. I think you're good though =]