Your thoughts on these, any thought at all

Angel W

New member
War,
what 's freedom for?
Anthems and mind control.
Blood soaked flags of the free
invisible or blind, minRAB can't see,
blindness creates history.
Father wife son and daughter
like pigs brought to slaughter
War

what's freedom for?
imprisionment and poor?
blood soaked memories for the free
lies, conformity
war,
what's freedom for?


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When you watch a bird flying through the sky
looking for a place to die.
Boredom sets them free,
bordedom will set us free.

The scenery holRAB a connection,
memories find a place to hide,
Judgements hold me.
judgement controls me,
Judgements conform me.

I sift the sand through my hanRAB,
tye-dye,
We scream tye-dye.




Two 14 line poems for school got assigned, so I tweaked my lyrics. I would

appreciate "constructive critisism" but I would rather hear your thoughts on

what they mean to you individualy. I posted two aiming for the one

with the most clear and definate meaning which I intened for them. Depending

on your responses.
Thank you!
 
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