your thoughts on poem please?

Naty

New member
we've been untrue
but still.
my heart choose you

your heart replied
(ba-thump)
but still we've lied

mistakes we've made
it's ok
it's not too late

again we'll try
and try
till it's done right

no more mistakes
just love
can this be fate?

just a lil short something I made outta the blue. what do you think?
 
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