Your opinion on my poem please? :)) "Swollen brain"?

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You hide in your little choking room
The time has stopped for you
Innocence long gone
Raped to the core

You search for answers
Or happiness
And days by days go by
Spinning around
On a child's carousel
Scared to lose control
And fall to the ground

Holding tightly to the egdes of the carousel chair
The songs of my childhood blasting away
I am dizzy
And my hair is fllying around
Talking to the sky
Blue eyes dropped to the ground

They don't offer me a hand to get down
And I'm left up there
High in the sky
I am scared
I might fall to the ground
And hit hard

A broken skull
A swollen brain
In pain
Screeching
Layed out on the ground
For all of you to take
And rape it inside.
 
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