First is first, i'm very serous about being a author, i want it so much. I'm 13 and i'm scared if i ever get the chance to be published will anyone take me serous and will anyone actually except me like a Agent or something. Plus i'm about 60 something pages in and using microsoft word and i believe i'm a great writer, but will people just see me as a immature 13 year old, i'm mature for my age, i analyze everything before making my move, kinda like chest. Also i'll like to know how to get published and what to do first.
Here's a sample of my book just to see my potential..
“Oh, hey Rayne.” I waved slightly at him. Bailey gave me a death glare. “Ash…” He was at a lost for words. I would be to if I had a crazed teen next to a weird looking sister. Bailey jumped the words before Audrey.
“Come on Ash.” She said grabbing Ash at her shoulders bringing her to her shoulders in a consoling matter, I rolled my eyes. I’m the one who needs consoling! She gave me another glare before shoving through the crowd with Ash. Pa-leez! Audrey gave me a questionable look, not a glare but more of a confused look before following Bailey and Ash. The crowd left as well. Maybe to scared to ask questions. But I knew I wouldn’t live this down.
You might not understand it but it's a sample, don't want people stealing so i just picked this up.
Thanks
~Bree~
Thanks for the heads up, plus it's a simple mistake.
Thanks! I appreciate all criticism and good luck to you on you're book.
I read, my favorite author is Richelle Mead, i love her books and yes i definitely need help with grammar i see, but it's not even edited yet. Also i aim high,very high and i barely take settle for second best, but i see you're reasoning of course and you're beyond right, when i turn 18 and get older to start a family I'll need security not promise, I'll keep working and practicing but I'll keep my options open.
Here's a sample of my book just to see my potential..
“Oh, hey Rayne.” I waved slightly at him. Bailey gave me a death glare. “Ash…” He was at a lost for words. I would be to if I had a crazed teen next to a weird looking sister. Bailey jumped the words before Audrey.
“Come on Ash.” She said grabbing Ash at her shoulders bringing her to her shoulders in a consoling matter, I rolled my eyes. I’m the one who needs consoling! She gave me another glare before shoving through the crowd with Ash. Pa-leez! Audrey gave me a questionable look, not a glare but more of a confused look before following Bailey and Ash. The crowd left as well. Maybe to scared to ask questions. But I knew I wouldn’t live this down.
You might not understand it but it's a sample, don't want people stealing so i just picked this up.
Thanks
~Bree~
Thanks for the heads up, plus it's a simple mistake.
Thanks! I appreciate all criticism and good luck to you on you're book.
I read, my favorite author is Richelle Mead, i love her books and yes i definitely need help with grammar i see, but it's not even edited yet. Also i aim high,very high and i barely take settle for second best, but i see you're reasoning of course and you're beyond right, when i turn 18 and get older to start a family I'll need security not promise, I'll keep working and practicing but I'll keep my options open.