you like poetry? rate mine!?

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HayLi A

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be brutal... no one will understand it, but how does it sound? it means alot to me.

underneath the darkness and lies,
an annoying lullabye whines,
and digging deeper you hear cries,
you cant follow, those bright lines.
so you come to me so brave and wise,
and i tell you, 'your delemas on many minds'
and with no respond you awaite, youre demise.
misenturrpetted you understand,
as you gaze at those bright lights
you understand, but you cant stand.
a soft cry when nothings alright
you dont understand
you try with all your might.
but it wont be enough tonight.
 
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