Yay! New Poem Tell Me What You Think! Please?

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~The Fellow,his lover and the Devil~

She claws at her chest
Scratches on her breast
This will soon be her last breath
The pain shall bring her death

She thinks about a fellow
He's tan,young, and mellow
It is her in which he seeks
Her beautiful black hair long and sleek

The devil emerges by his side
Over the land he seems to glide
Then shatters the mans heart
Like a piece of glass art

The Devil lies and says she's dead
That her folks had layed her to bed
"My love,my love!" yells the fellow
Painful laughter the Devil will bellow

She runs toward them, blood dried
He had been on his knees and cried
The beautiful woman slaps the Devil for his lies
A slap that should've won a prize.


I was in Tennessee on my way back home from Florida and I had just read a Stephen King book. Well one of the stories inspired me with a poem about the Devil. It was The Man In The Black Suit. Well there is my poem, I hope you like it!

JoJo
 
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