Wrote these lyrics about my cousin, what'd you think?

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"Loner"


Drink so much a day
Nothing could ever heal this pain
Let me phone and say...
I miss you so much you're where I remain

Got a lot of depression today
It's been two months and I still feel the same
Dad is there any other way...
Come on now son you've only yourself to blame

(Chorus)
I'm such a loner
Why won't anyone help me out
So i'm a moaner
It's not my fault if I can't help but shout

My life is getting worse
If I don't think of you i'll see you at some club
Everything just fucking hurts
None of my mates visit me they stay at the pub

The day starts without a fuss
Woke up with a hangover on the side of a curb
I can't even begin to curse
Why do you phone me when you know i'll hang up

(Chorus)
I'm such a loner
Why won't anyone help me out
So i'm a moaner
It's not my fault if I can't help but shout

I'm such a loner
Why won't anyone help me out
So i'm a moaner
It's not my fault if I can't help but shout

I'm such a loner...
 
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