i wrote it bc its almost his birthday (hes been gone many yrs now) but bc im not in the best of mood & im only 19, so its probably not the best poem... its not really finished, seems kinda broken. but any comments?
i still cry
i still shed tears
i still wonder why
i havent had you these past 10 years
it may have been awhile
but my smile still breaks
and through my journeys miles
i have made many mistakes
ive grown up now daddy
but i still feel so small
are you disappoined in me
that ive built up this wall
i try to be
someone you will love
daddy, do you still love me
am i a daughter you are proud of
if you can hear
at night i pray
my memories havent disappeared
but i want back whats been taken away
i still cry
i still shed tears
i still wonder why
i havent had you these past 10 years
it may have been awhile
but my smile still breaks
and through my journeys miles
i have made many mistakes
ive grown up now daddy
but i still feel so small
are you disappoined in me
that ive built up this wall
i try to be
someone you will love
daddy, do you still love me
am i a daughter you are proud of
if you can hear
at night i pray
my memories havent disappeared
but i want back whats been taken away