ive to do an assignment for english and i wanted to practice writing out descriptions. So this is my practice description. I decided to do the sunset. Please give your ideas, comments and ratings so i can think of how to improve and i wont make any mistakes for the assignment.
* One of the most useful pieces of advice that ive found really helpful is that u should always try to paint what you see with words for writing to describe and that has helped alot.
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The sky was a mystery of colours. Red, pink, purple, orange, yellow and brown all mixed together to give the picture perfect landscape. Just gazing at it, brought a sense of tranquility. The sun was melting into the sky. I was basking in the warmth glow that illuminated the place. The sun seemed to bring a sort of dense atmosphere that felt refreshing. It seemed like forever, but it was not. The night was pushing its way through. There was a strip of grey among the fiery colours of the sun. The sun was sinking into the sapphire ocean. The horizon was turning a darker grey. With every moment that went by there was a change in colour of the sky. In comparison to the soft beauty of the sun, the night was a beauty in its own way. It was more mystifying than the sunset. The night had dissolved the sun and the sky was now a midnight blue. It will be another day until the sun sets again.
* One of the most useful pieces of advice that ive found really helpful is that u should always try to paint what you see with words for writing to describe and that has helped alot.
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The sky was a mystery of colours. Red, pink, purple, orange, yellow and brown all mixed together to give the picture perfect landscape. Just gazing at it, brought a sense of tranquility. The sun was melting into the sky. I was basking in the warmth glow that illuminated the place. The sun seemed to bring a sort of dense atmosphere that felt refreshing. It seemed like forever, but it was not. The night was pushing its way through. There was a strip of grey among the fiery colours of the sun. The sun was sinking into the sapphire ocean. The horizon was turning a darker grey. With every moment that went by there was a change in colour of the sky. In comparison to the soft beauty of the sun, the night was a beauty in its own way. It was more mystifying than the sunset. The night had dissolved the sun and the sky was now a midnight blue. It will be another day until the sun sets again.