Writing poetry about the people I meet. Comments?

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Walked into a restaurant one day and met Sherrie, my waitress. She sparked poetry.

SHERRIE

All I wanted
was a bite to eat
Instead I got
swept off my feet.

Greeted with
a killer smile
Big bright eyes
Interesting style.

Delicate fingers
write my need
Then jauntily off
to retrieve my feed.

She floats about
on angel wings
Distracting my thoughts
Her movements sing.

Beautiful blonde
Tall and slim
A very nice girl
Perfect for Tim!

All I wanted
was a bite to eat
But a taste of Sherrie
is the ultimate treat.

6/20/09
 
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