EmmiieBaybee
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I'm writing a romance and i normally write horror so as you can imagine is a Challange. Haha. And one thing defiantly need help with is when the main characters are kissing for ages. Just now they finally got back together. After a long struggle... It was cute the way they kissed.
Basically he she said one word... That confirms it. And he launches himself at her because they have wanted each other for so long. But i want them to kiss for awhile. But how do i write that? I normally just pull out the movements..
Eg' explain how there touching each other (romanticly) and then randomly remind the readers they are still kissing.
I was wondering if there were any better technique or random ideas that could inspire my writing.
Another question i have is for the main characters friend.. Hes kind of a sleaze to put him nicley. He plays the roll of the bad guy that always manages to get the attractive girls. Nothing is ever stated, it's just noticed. That he always has a new girl clinging to his harm. Right now he's dirty dancing with an old girlfriend who is apart of the story line later on in the story. And i wanted him to 'take her home' to put it nicley. Because its the kind of character my second male is. Would it be bad if i were to slyly say "were going up stairs, take the couch." too my other characters ?
Would that be too crass? Because it gives my other characters a chance to bond as well. Cause then i can say 'want to go for a walk?' and they can speak about there past. Which i need them too.
The story is writen from my main girl characters perspective. By the way
Thanks for your oppinion.
Examples are deeply apreciated!!
best answer wins XD
Basically he she said one word... That confirms it. And he launches himself at her because they have wanted each other for so long. But i want them to kiss for awhile. But how do i write that? I normally just pull out the movements..
Eg' explain how there touching each other (romanticly) and then randomly remind the readers they are still kissing.
I was wondering if there were any better technique or random ideas that could inspire my writing.
Another question i have is for the main characters friend.. Hes kind of a sleaze to put him nicley. He plays the roll of the bad guy that always manages to get the attractive girls. Nothing is ever stated, it's just noticed. That he always has a new girl clinging to his harm. Right now he's dirty dancing with an old girlfriend who is apart of the story line later on in the story. And i wanted him to 'take her home' to put it nicley. Because its the kind of character my second male is. Would it be bad if i were to slyly say "were going up stairs, take the couch." too my other characters ?
Would that be too crass? Because it gives my other characters a chance to bond as well. Cause then i can say 'want to go for a walk?' and they can speak about there past. Which i need them too.
The story is writen from my main girl characters perspective. By the way
Thanks for your oppinion.
Examples are deeply apreciated!!
best answer wins XD