Writing a wedding greeting for bride & groom. Does this sound Okay?

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Here I have written on the final slide that will play on the digital photo frame we're giving as a wedding gift:

"With warm wishes for joy and happiness always, and all the best for your wedded life ahead."

Does this sound okay? Or how would you say it?
Haha, if it sounds cheesy it's because it's two e-cards I found online mashed together.

How would YOU say it??
How about:

"With warm wishes for joy and happiness always, and all of the best for your new wedded life."

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