Writers: Do you have any advice for my story?

Max Tyler

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Title: The Rejuvenator

Plot: When Quentin Striker's parents fall mysterious ill, he embarks on a self-imposed quest to find a magical cure called the Rejuvenator, because he doesn't want to end up in an orphanage as that looks like the only possible outcome. However, legend has it that the Rejuvenator lies in a haunted, ruined castle in the enchanted forest of Eldenstar. Above all things, the fourteen-year-old is afraid of the dark even though he doesn't want to admit it to anyone let alone himself. However will he be able to find the cure - if it exists! - and face his fears? But time is running out and his parents' illness is taking a turn for the worst...

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Well, that's about it. Along the way he meets different people both good and bad and falls in love with a girl even though she doesn't return his affections. There will be monsters in the woods to fight who are guarding the cure and all kinds of trouble to get out of. So what do you think of it? Please excuse the spelling mistakes.

Thanks a ton in advance!
 
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