title: (quiet) dance
fireflies
tiptoe
through a windbrushed night
iridescent wings
erupt
a million
sea-green tassels
burning the black sky
like fireworks they slide
down
into moonpainted black shadows
with a blaze they awaken
with a glimpse they disappear
Do you like it? What do you think it means?
Is it strong/powerful/meaningful?
Any thing you would change, or any suggestions for improvement?
fireflies
tiptoe
through a windbrushed night
iridescent wings
erupt
a million
sea-green tassels
burning the black sky
like fireworks they slide
down
into moonpainted black shadows
with a blaze they awaken
with a glimpse they disappear
Do you like it? What do you think it means?
Is it strong/powerful/meaningful?
Any thing you would change, or any suggestions for improvement?