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Taylor
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I am currently creating a story. I just want to know peoples opinion on it so far. It's about a girl named Keiko whose older sister Yoko is an award winning author. Keiko's sister is currently working on a new book. One night, Keiko visits Yoko's room to see if she is working, but her sister has already fallen asleep. She notices Yoko's new book on the table and decides to look through it for a minute. When she touches the book, though, she is suddenly transported inside of it. Now, Keiko has to live in the world her sister created and fight many unknown beasts. In the book, Keiko meets five other induviduals who are a fighting group called the Chikara. She is especially drawn to their leader named Kenji. He's hot headed but also caring and smart. Meanwhile, Yoko, who had witnessed her sister being taken, has to find out why and how her sister was transported. She's determined to get her sister back. In the end, will Keiko really want to leave Kenji and the others?