As a habit, I write short stories about twenty or thirty pages long to get my mind working. This time I have to turn it in for a grade, and I'd like your opinions. Here is the introduction-- and then I'll explain in the plot. Thanks!
I watched her chest grow larger and larger, and then collapse repeatedly as she slept. She was so beautiful. She was mine.
I strode over to where she slept, her white ears flickering every now and then. Her nose twitched. It was one of Lexia's habits, to do that. I dug outwardly to her, to bury her in the warmth of the dead grass beneath us. The feeling of soil beneath the toes of my paws felt cool.
The fogginess of the night almost came to an end as I rested my head upon the bulge of her stomach. I kissed it lightly, dreaming about the future ahead of me. How one day I will rejoice in the care of three beautiful pups of my own. Lexia mumbled a low growl in her sleep. I chortled how wolves chortle. Motherly instincts...
I heard a familiar tapping noise, and my ears pricked up. It seemed outside of our den. I lapped my lips defensively and peeked outside the cave...
The moment I looked out, something tackled me. "SHH!" I barked unexpectedly. As I saw Heather, she smiling widely. "I'm glad you're here, Anton," Heather giggled out of her razor teeth. Her red-orange coloring glazed over her ice white fur gorgeously. But no one could compare to my Lexia.
Back to reality, here's the plot:
Lexia and Anton are basically... married. In a kind of wolf kind of thing, because their wolves. Their best friends were Micah & Heather, except when Micah died Heather was just alone, pregnant. Anyway, they live in Russia-- near China. Men who are referred to as "Zola Chelovek" or just Chelovek, which means evil men in Russian. So the Chelovek steal the wolves of the arctic and take them on a journey towards China. Along the way, they meet a Siamese Cat named Trinity, who was also stolen by the Chelovek. Once reaching their destinations, it is hell. The Chelovek stomp on their legs and neck, they push them from tall cliffs and they even electrocute them just so they are weak and can't move. Anyway, they are crammed into tiny cages where they meet Zeus, a beautiful shiny lab who was kidnapped from America. They don't realize they just reached a Chinese Fur Farm. They take Heather into a different room. They hear piercing screams-- and then they see Heather being thrown into a pile of bloody almost lifeless animals. What is missing, but her fur? She was skinned alive, and that is the horror contained here. Anton and Lexia end up saving the pups & Zeus. So when Anton is going to be taken in for skinning, but Kingpin, a noble hawk, comes and scares off the man skinning because Anton is Russian as he is. Turns out, Kingpin's entire flock, including wife & son, were hunted down. He is looking for Lidia, his lost daughter, who only has a discolored feather of hers to remember her by. So Kingpin frees the animals he can, including Zeus, Lexia & Trinity. As they are escaping, they find a wagon pulled by a Chinese pony named Lee, who's husband had escaped but left her. So they escape with Lee, and along the way they find Kingpin's daughter, Lidia, and they save Heather's two pups. They are all united because they have lost someone in some way. In the end, they all live happily in Russia.
I've named it "Winter Coats" devoted to the fact that they were at a fur farm. I am writing this just for Fur Farm awareness, where animals are tortured repeatedly.
Sound good? Any changes? Thanks!
I watched her chest grow larger and larger, and then collapse repeatedly as she slept. She was so beautiful. She was mine.
I strode over to where she slept, her white ears flickering every now and then. Her nose twitched. It was one of Lexia's habits, to do that. I dug outwardly to her, to bury her in the warmth of the dead grass beneath us. The feeling of soil beneath the toes of my paws felt cool.
The fogginess of the night almost came to an end as I rested my head upon the bulge of her stomach. I kissed it lightly, dreaming about the future ahead of me. How one day I will rejoice in the care of three beautiful pups of my own. Lexia mumbled a low growl in her sleep. I chortled how wolves chortle. Motherly instincts...
I heard a familiar tapping noise, and my ears pricked up. It seemed outside of our den. I lapped my lips defensively and peeked outside the cave...
The moment I looked out, something tackled me. "SHH!" I barked unexpectedly. As I saw Heather, she smiling widely. "I'm glad you're here, Anton," Heather giggled out of her razor teeth. Her red-orange coloring glazed over her ice white fur gorgeously. But no one could compare to my Lexia.
Back to reality, here's the plot:
Lexia and Anton are basically... married. In a kind of wolf kind of thing, because their wolves. Their best friends were Micah & Heather, except when Micah died Heather was just alone, pregnant. Anyway, they live in Russia-- near China. Men who are referred to as "Zola Chelovek" or just Chelovek, which means evil men in Russian. So the Chelovek steal the wolves of the arctic and take them on a journey towards China. Along the way, they meet a Siamese Cat named Trinity, who was also stolen by the Chelovek. Once reaching their destinations, it is hell. The Chelovek stomp on their legs and neck, they push them from tall cliffs and they even electrocute them just so they are weak and can't move. Anyway, they are crammed into tiny cages where they meet Zeus, a beautiful shiny lab who was kidnapped from America. They don't realize they just reached a Chinese Fur Farm. They take Heather into a different room. They hear piercing screams-- and then they see Heather being thrown into a pile of bloody almost lifeless animals. What is missing, but her fur? She was skinned alive, and that is the horror contained here. Anton and Lexia end up saving the pups & Zeus. So when Anton is going to be taken in for skinning, but Kingpin, a noble hawk, comes and scares off the man skinning because Anton is Russian as he is. Turns out, Kingpin's entire flock, including wife & son, were hunted down. He is looking for Lidia, his lost daughter, who only has a discolored feather of hers to remember her by. So Kingpin frees the animals he can, including Zeus, Lexia & Trinity. As they are escaping, they find a wagon pulled by a Chinese pony named Lee, who's husband had escaped but left her. So they escape with Lee, and along the way they find Kingpin's daughter, Lidia, and they save Heather's two pups. They are all united because they have lost someone in some way. In the end, they all live happily in Russia.
I've named it "Winter Coats" devoted to the fact that they were at a fur farm. I am writing this just for Fur Farm awareness, where animals are tortured repeatedly.
Sound good? Any changes? Thanks!