Would you read my story based on this short blurb? Please tell me what you think!?

Max Tyler

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TITLE: The Magical Man

PLOT: For hundreds and thousands of years, the world of Eldenaria has been ravaged by a war between Scientists and Magicians. Both sides have claimed the right to rule the world of power, but neither side has proved themselves worthy of the office or so thinks the High King. Then when Quentin Striker - a moving and famous lawyer - turns out to be the age-long prophesied Magical Man, the world is turned upside down. All hell breaks loose for both the Scientists and the Magicians form a wholehearted alliance against him!

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Just to clear things up a little, Quentin Striker is a lawyer when the book starts out and decides to investigate the latest person he has to speak for. That's when the story picks up and he even visits an Oracle in the process who proclaims him to be the Magical Man in front of thousands of witnesses as tons of people gather every day to get a chance at speaking to the Oracle. Then the Scientists and Magicians find out causing him to escape along with the person he has to speak for, a woman who possesses more secrets than leaves grow on trees. He also finds out from the Oracle that he has to unite the Scientists and Magicians in Eldenaria or else the war will cause the world to be destroyed as each side will make weapons far too powerful to be used at all. So what do you think about it? Any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks a ton in advance !

P.S. Quentin Striker is my standard name for the hero of my stories.
 
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