Would you please evaluate my this poem?

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8 November 2010
Zahid from Pakistan

I HAVE NOTHING NOW TO SHAME

My acquaintance is curse
Their production is worse
Their moves are the indicators
Of their intellectual matters

Their wisdom is to hurt me
Bow my head to their knee
They did badly with my brother
And yet not left my mother

If they possess angel wings
Though I will peal their skins
They did best in unkindness
They saluted their blindness

Now my passions are in control
But an evil I am going to enroll
My heart speaks of the revenge
That would have with it no range

O Allah if you did see this all
Be present on my every call
I decided to do all the same
I have nothing now to shame
 
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