I am a student learning English.
I wrote as it came to mind to boost English communication skill.
Would you check to see if there are any awkward expressions?
Q : You have piercing mark on your ears, don't you?
A: Yes, I have had my ears pierced. However, it didn't last long. Maybe only two weeks? I just left them blocked. For fashion, you should be diligent and patient, but in my case, I couldn't. I had to be careful for 1 month after piercing my ears. It was bothersome to me. So, I just gave up.
In addition, I felt like I became a cow which has a nose ring. Plus, I have seen my friend's one side ear torn because someone pulled her earring. She said that it won't restore ever as it was. It made my decision firm that I won't pierce my ears even though it makes me look better.
I like the shape of my ear. I don't make any chances in which my ears might be hurt.
I wrote as it came to mind to boost English communication skill.
Would you check to see if there are any awkward expressions?
Q : You have piercing mark on your ears, don't you?
A: Yes, I have had my ears pierced. However, it didn't last long. Maybe only two weeks? I just left them blocked. For fashion, you should be diligent and patient, but in my case, I couldn't. I had to be careful for 1 month after piercing my ears. It was bothersome to me. So, I just gave up.
In addition, I felt like I became a cow which has a nose ring. Plus, I have seen my friend's one side ear torn because someone pulled her earring. She said that it won't restore ever as it was. It made my decision firm that I won't pierce my ears even though it makes me look better.
I like the shape of my ear. I don't make any chances in which my ears might be hurt.