Would you comment on a poem called "Just Words"?

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Watching over you, Always

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words are as
empty
as legends without heroes
baskets without flowers
a well that's gone dry
yet

words
can be strong
holding up
the heaviest of hearts

we can be stripped
of all we possess
and have nothing left
to give

but
as long as we
can speak with love

we can move the proverbial mountain
restore peace to a troubled soul
stop a steady flow
of tears
a trembling lip

and in that moment
our words
are the most invaluable thing
on this earth
 
this is why proper grammar and punctuation do not matter to me; though i may dabble in poetry i am really into humanity and i see i am not alone

peace love empathy
 
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