I recently strted writing a new story. I'm not entirely sure about it though. Does it sound interesting?
It is hundreds of years after an unspecified world collapse and the world has devolved into chaos. Most of it is mostly rural, very basic education/technology, very religious, and large military. Groups are often at war with each other. However, one group is different (lets call it A). It re-built and grew, becoming very highly evolved (green building, high technology, "futuristic"). Group A is separated by large distances between the other groups. They have invented a stealth technology that allows them be invisible to the others. They do not interact, and don’t know much about the other groups, as there is virtually no travel between them. The rural uneducated masses are unaware the Group A exists.
The story starts in a small town outside the capital city of Group A. This is home to the 6 main characters, a group of kids ages 8-17. They don’t know each other before, but come together during the story. One day, the two teens are goofing off after school. They are in the woods when they stumble upon a crashed plane. Seeing no one (and no bodies) they return and tell the leaders. They go back but it is gone. That night a large noise is heard outside. People go outside, there is confusion, but nothing is found. The next morning one of the teen boys is missing. The other teen boy wants to find out what happened. Efforts are made to find out, but with no results. Fed up, the one teen decides to go after him(his best friend since childhood) himself. The other characters come together, and they search for clues to what could have happened. They uncover a conspiracy and hidden history. Coded messages are received that discover are from him. Soon, they know where he is. They go after him, facing more challenges along the way. Many adventures later, they rescue him. Finally, the adults have caught up to them and they are all rescued.
What do you think? Sorry it's so long. I've just started writing it, so I'm open to suggestions for changes. Thanks in advance!
It is hundreds of years after an unspecified world collapse and the world has devolved into chaos. Most of it is mostly rural, very basic education/technology, very religious, and large military. Groups are often at war with each other. However, one group is different (lets call it A). It re-built and grew, becoming very highly evolved (green building, high technology, "futuristic"). Group A is separated by large distances between the other groups. They have invented a stealth technology that allows them be invisible to the others. They do not interact, and don’t know much about the other groups, as there is virtually no travel between them. The rural uneducated masses are unaware the Group A exists.
The story starts in a small town outside the capital city of Group A. This is home to the 6 main characters, a group of kids ages 8-17. They don’t know each other before, but come together during the story. One day, the two teens are goofing off after school. They are in the woods when they stumble upon a crashed plane. Seeing no one (and no bodies) they return and tell the leaders. They go back but it is gone. That night a large noise is heard outside. People go outside, there is confusion, but nothing is found. The next morning one of the teen boys is missing. The other teen boy wants to find out what happened. Efforts are made to find out, but with no results. Fed up, the one teen decides to go after him(his best friend since childhood) himself. The other characters come together, and they search for clues to what could have happened. They uncover a conspiracy and hidden history. Coded messages are received that discover are from him. Soon, they know where he is. They go after him, facing more challenges along the way. Many adventures later, they rescue him. Finally, the adults have caught up to them and they are all rescued.
What do you think? Sorry it's so long. I've just started writing it, so I'm open to suggestions for changes. Thanks in advance!