Would this plot make a good novel?

Diya

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I've always loved writing, and it's my ambition to write a series of novels. I've never been able to complete a single novel though, but I've finally hit upon an idea I think could be the start of something good :D
They're far from perfect, and being 15, it may not be the most mature and sophisticated idea, but here we go:

When picking up her aunt from Heathrow airport, Ada is kidknapped by a young man and woman who drug her. She wakes up outside a castle, and discovers that she has entered the 'London Underworld', a city that supplies drugs, arms and soldiers to the outside world, seperate from the English capital we all know. Ada has been taken to work for the Royal House of London, to be a maid for the youngest princess. The women of the royal families of all the underworld cities all over the world are used as political pawns, forced to marry at a young age and bear as many children as possible. Ada befriends several princesses, one of them being the Princess of the Kolkata Underworld, who was born and raised in an English village, who has fallen for a farmer's son. After the Princess saves Ada's life, Ada repays her by agreeing to pose as her to the royal House of Kolkata so she can be with the love of her life. Ada struggles to maintain the illusion to the rest of the world that she is indeed a princess, and at the same time tries to liberate the women in the Princess' position.

What do we think?
 
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