Would this be an okay birthday poem for someone?

[ma™]

The life that was you
first came into view
39 years ago
today

nature and nurture
both took affect
to make you the man
you've become

all that you are and
all that you still will be
is reason enough
to celebrate for me.

 

[chacha, not as cold]

If by okay you mean perfect and wonderful, yes it would be okay.

 

[Mizzenmast]

wondermous....