"Worker Bees" My new poem =), whatcha' think?

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Thomas

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oh you poor little worker bees
no one around to hear your pleas
you'll work your life until you die
no one around to hear you cry

unknowing of the pains of love
no concept of god above
numb to all, there is no pain
a life like that, is quite plain

oh you poor little worker bees
all that honey, is such a tease
Do you ever get to take a sip?
nix, the queen would surely flip

So you live you insignificant lives
buzzing around your various hives
never stopping to think or feel
you existence is somewhat surreal

oh you poor little worker bees
carefree you fly on the breeze
kissing flowers, and making honey
every day a gem, it's always sunny

The life of a worker bee may not be so bad
maybe worker bees are always glad
to fly from flower to flower every day
every day a blessing like each sun ray

What do you think it means?(if you get it 100% right you'll get best answer) Can you find anyways to make it better?
....Why do ppl like "Alastor" even come on this site?
some ppl are getting close to the meaning but no banana yet =T
 
i think it means that the bees are oblivious of the fact that there just being used by the queen bee, to make honey and they never get to taste it, but since they are not human and have no emotions there okay with it so the continue with their lives doing what supposed to be doing and don't think much of it. which means being oblivious might not be so bad after all.
 
It sounds almost like everyday life for us....One moment it's monotonous and unrewarding, but then again we think of something and we don't care. It doesn't matter for some of the things. Kinda cool! I like it!!
 
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