Will you please tell me what you think of my poem?!?

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Ashly Nieuwenhuis

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It might not be by law
But by love
We might not have any profe
A few pictures from when I was young
It's been five years
With lots of emotion
some good but lots bad
Many tears
Even sleepless nights
Five years lacking hugs
And I love you
We have no pictures
Only a few memories together
We don't understand eachother
We don't see eye to eye
We were both raised in different times
Different lives and famileys
You hear those songs.....
About being daddys little girl
Not me
I have so much anger towards you
It makes things hard
Sometimes even impossible
hurtful words have been said
But also many things have not been said
I will always be yout daughter
The love will always be there
I wish I could go back to being young
To be daddys little girl.

This poem is called
Daddys little girl
 
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