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(I am attempting to work with the older style of language for a book I am writing, If you don't mind please give me some feedback on this poem, I appreciate it! If you have any suggestions for a revise too please?
Hath ye no heart?
Doth thou lie for thine own lust?
Fervor shan't matched.
Hiding behind thine guarded shield.
Thine mind twisted in hateful draw,
thine soul lost unto greed.
Angels turn facing far from thine wickedness.
Vain art thou choices,
littered amongst sins of man.
Doth thou shut thine eyes unto God's grace?
Whence thy soul departs from this earth.
Shall thy not yearn to glimpse thine savior's face?
© 2010 Jennifer Dell Bergerson
All rights reserved
Hath ye no heart?
Doth thou lie for thine own lust?
Fervor shan't matched.
Hiding behind thine guarded shield.
Thine mind twisted in hateful draw,
thine soul lost unto greed.
Angels turn facing far from thine wickedness.
Vain art thou choices,
littered amongst sins of man.
Doth thou shut thine eyes unto God's grace?
Whence thy soul departs from this earth.
Shall thy not yearn to glimpse thine savior's face?
© 2010 Jennifer Dell Bergerson
All rights reserved