Will you give me your thoughts on my poem?

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Shazlaarrr

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The clouds in my head,
Pushing thoughts to the sky.
Creating the most wonderful
Music.
Pitter. Patter.
Patter. Pitter.
Lulling me softly, softly
Ever so gently
Pulling me deeper, deeper
Even further
Swaying to and fro
In time to the pitters.
In time to the patters.

And it's just me,
And the clouds
In my head
Just me.
Just falling asound
To the sleep of the rain.


I appreciate any comments! Love you guys! xxx
 
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