Will you evaluate this poem please?

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22 November 2010
Zahid from Pakistan

AFTER I FOUND MYSELF

A day I came to know!
I dwell in some roses
I am in the fragrance of love
I am the piece of your flesh
Away but not apart from you

How did I feel myself?
By the time I was in rose
The time in the fragrance
By time I was in rainbow
The time, I, in your eyes

It was time, when I sense!
The connection of our souls
An integration of our minds
Dissolving of our thoughts
Forming of a new protocol

What could I do?
After I found myself
As unknown state of a kingdom
Vanished soldiers of a big brigade
Like broken love of Majnu
 
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