Will you critique (be specific) this joined cinquain poem for me?

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Tori ?????

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Once My Home
by Victoria Tarrani
© 201101.10

It's time
misty, I know
lantern's light, deep shadows
the cadence is calling me home
it changed
my place
fragrant mint grows
by the moss covered well
this place no longer welcomes me
tears fall.
 
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