Why won't my English teacher accept my Post-Modern Poetry?

i dont know if this is a joke or ur actually serious
if u r, give her a detailed explanation and interpretation, list poetic devices used(besides repition) and see what happens,
 
Awwww!

It's not "post-modern poetry."

Have you written modern poetry?

This is repetition with an absurdist twist at the end. If it were presented on a stage, Samuel Beckett might get away with it.

my rating: number 2 Rotten Tomato (see, we get that the "eighth" eight is a pineapple, but we don't care)

Sorry. Go write something about a piano and a pineapple. That might provide a nice juxtapostion that your teacher would appreciate. Compare, contrast, examine, and finish.
 
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