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I have to write an essay on why history is important. I finished my first paragraph and I want to see what you guys think.
"According to Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary “history” is defined as a chronological record of significant events affecting a nation or institution often including an explanation of their causes. It’s simple to say that history is just taking events and explaining what happened, but it’s more than that. History is very important; it involves learning about different governments, societies, and cultures. History, US History to be specific is a very interesting subject to me. Having emigrated from the Spain, every new tidbit of information about the US is intriguing to me in some way. Something that happens now could affect the future, and in all actuality we are the future’s past."
I don't want any help, I just want your opinion. Is my thesis good? my introduction? my english grammar?
-Thank you.
"According to Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary “history” is defined as a chronological record of significant events affecting a nation or institution often including an explanation of their causes. It’s simple to say that history is just taking events and explaining what happened, but it’s more than that. History is very important; it involves learning about different governments, societies, and cultures. History, US History to be specific is a very interesting subject to me. Having emigrated from the Spain, every new tidbit of information about the US is intriguing to me in some way. Something that happens now could affect the future, and in all actuality we are the future’s past."
I don't want any help, I just want your opinion. Is my thesis good? my introduction? my english grammar?
-Thank you.