Which "beginning of a book" do you prefer?

Uncle Wayne

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Book Title: "God's Ancestors"

Chapter 1 –

She quickly ripped off her skirt, made a temporary bandage, and covered his wounds. Then she injected him in his hip with an anti-toxin to stop the internal spreading of the nuclear contamination.

*****
Gamma, a beautiful young nurse, looked out the hall window of her hospital ward. As she noticed the cloudy mist of the nuclear wasteland on the horizon, she thought to herself “Today, a young man is risking his life for the sake of our planet.”

The news report had indicated that he was selected for the mission because he was yada, yada, yada.




Or #2:

Chapter 1 --

When she arrived, she saw the early signs of radiation poisoning on his hands and arms. She quickly ripped off her skirt, made a temporary bandage, and covered his wounds. Then she injected him in his hip with an anti-toxin.

*****
Gamma, a beautiful young nurse, looked out the hall window of her hospital ward. Yada. yada, yada
 
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