When you want to, but can't, what do you do?...I rant?

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Rant On My Brother, Rant On

I've had enough of biting this tongue
Twisted two fisted port listed and going down
For the last time
With my fast rhyme
I'll beat you defeat you
cause i see through your clear view
window less shell that keeps in this hell
this reek that i smell the lies that you tell
to deflect the rays being shot
cause your not my equal
this ain't no prequel
won't be no sequel
your not my equal
and I know it
and that's all I need to know

©rad081508

I have my reasons

STAY TUNED..PART DEAUX IS A COMIN'
Miss Poem - Controlling HER??? Tell me you meant here,please!!!!

ET - I'm just getting started , then I'll be departed
from this rap race I'm in , don't matter whose skin I get under ..with this thunder bolts of words I'm throwing, yea it's flowing..down the river of bitter bile,,,mile after NIle...all the while washing it out...leaving me no doubt...I did the right thing...and why???

"I do the right thing
cause it's the right thing to do" rad
 
Loved it...am going through pure unmitigated hell trying to transport a just purchased car from next state...the above works well if I switch around a few words. Can you hear my ranting...
I have never seen more catch 22's in my entire life!
 
Here's my rant

Picturing you tied firmly to a bed of nails
Gnashing at the teeth and hearing useless wails
You tore out my heart as you played the lovers game
Now I laugh and howl with Satan as death calls out your name

Angry poems make great metal music lyrics. Keep it up you may be writing for the next band.
 
Is this a rap challenge? No, just kidding, but your words do have that angry flow to them which is becoming more and more popular by musical association. Now you must don baggy clothes and voluminous gold chains and begin to talk in a voice that speaks only somewhat understandably.

I have issues with the rap genre, but not with this poem as this is not its intent. You know what you need to know, that is good, and I know what I need to know. Long may your poetry sing, long may I live to hear.
 
The title says it all. "Rant On My Brother, Rant On".
If I was a Shrink I'd prescribe reading a fun, light-hearted book such as Salinger's Catcher in the Rye. That thing is hilarious.
 
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