M Mimi New member Jul 26, 2009 #1 using adjectives or using adverbs ending with 'ly'. Does using plenty of adverbs ending with 'ly' make a story sound not so nice?
using adjectives or using adverbs ending with 'ly'. Does using plenty of adverbs ending with 'ly' make a story sound not so nice?
S Sweet_d New member Jul 26, 2009 #2 Um, I think one should be more careful with those adverbs. A story has to flow, and hearing 'ly' adverbs every second is annoying. You don't want the sound of that rolling off your tongue every second, therefore a change is good.
Um, I think one should be more careful with those adverbs. A story has to flow, and hearing 'ly' adverbs every second is annoying. You don't want the sound of that rolling off your tongue every second, therefore a change is good.
