when in jail. poem. READ AND COMMENT. Thank you.?

Silent Shoes

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when in jail

i fell flat on my face
hands on the ground
didn't make a move.
what a mistake, o,
silly me, thinking fast.

keeps me in the room,
i don't say a word
i don't move at all
sits and thinks and thinks
lovely lovely in 1981 when I met you
all a far memory now.

i forgot sunshine, broken glass
missing your meals
warm kiss, sweet moan
in summer, left you alone
whisper so sweetly, sorry
I'm sorry

in the east the ice is melting
a river in the timesickness
of my mind, winter is so slow
will see you sometime
as years and years creep through my soul.

the only feeling a quaint longing,
all across the cement sky
hear yelling and yelling
missing the way you touched my face.
i remember you, so clear, like water.

but in fall, it's still slow
creepcreep, o, why, when i feel cold?
i don't know the autumn leaves,
the summer's groves
the haunting touch of a winter's snow.

in here, i do not see.
i'm blind and i'm lost,
all i see is faint visions in my head
growing fainter and fainter
with the passing of another year's glow.
 
That's a very good poem!! Lol, you could even make that a rap song if you wanted to ;)

answer mine plz??
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aq4mdQX7dIfFKUsSJkL5ilXsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090713173822AAFpazQ
 
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