Whats your opinion of this song/poem?

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As deep as the Nile, thoughts of you run through my blood
deepening at the edges and weakening at the knees.
Pulling me in close to your chest just to breathe
and saving your last breath for me to take.
Holding on to the luck before we have to leave
pure luck for the right soul and we must believe
that all of this won’t end, just hold on

We’re all enemies in our own bodies,
its intriguing to think that we judge the flaws rather the insecurities,
but love is here to stay, til the sun decides to die
we’ll be hand in hand, side by side
reaching up to think of something to say
make you feel this way everyday for the rest of your life,
haven’t you ever wanted to fly?

I will never let you down,
I will stand by your side tonight
even if it kills me,
even if I don’t get the chance to fly,
you’re smile makes me higher than the midnight sky.

Hold back the tears,
the flood wall has collapsed already
and im tired of running with you,
so lets settle down
and fly.

We’re all enemies in our own bodies,
its intriguing to think that we judge the flaws rather the insecurities,
but love is here to stay, til the sun decides to die
we’ll be hand in hand, side by side
reaching up to think of something to say
make you feel this way everyday for the rest of your life,
haven’t you ever wanted to fly?

And I promise,
I do wanna love you
I want to try to make it
I will, we will, we will fly
wow you people suck. thanks alot. its about my dad having to deal with my mom having cancer and you call it and ugly and too long? wow fuck you
Its more of a song than a poem.
 
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