What's your opinion of this poem?

J

Justin

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Cataclysm

These shadows exempt nothing but death
Lifeless souls that expel no breath
My heart weakens with feelings of sorrow
For this place there exists no tommorow

Deadened trees, scorched grass
Crumbling buildings, broken glass

I take notice of pain
I try to be wary
However this feeling is vain
That I'm currently bearing

These broken streets breed pestilence
Poisoning creatures that dare to commence

These lands afar reflect a time long past
When everything turned gray
That fateful day, shall I say
When life disappeared
 
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