what you think of theses lyrics of a song i wrote?

jamielsalas

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the name is a wonderful day

oh i wake up and see the blood soak sun
oh i wake up and see you
oh god what have i done
oh why cant i love you
it never ends when i open my eyes and i fell the rain
just waiting here alone with the pain of living
never see the sunshine go away oh what a wonderful day
oh god what a day

someone someone please help me here
i don't have to much time all this pain i have in me
i must give it away please call the children
i have a present for you
a life time of regret and living all just for you
oh isn't it a wonderful day the sky shining blue
the smell of death is in the air oh why cant it to be you
i given all that i have but its never good enough for you

wake up wake up my sick baby put on your hat and go
the war is just beginning it wont wait for you
look at the sky isn't it so blue cant you smell the blood est victims
they want you and when you fire your gun and aim up high
and prey for u never forget your dear sweet mother
and tell her how much you love her
oh its a wonderful day with sky shining blue
oh why don't you take you life no one wants you
and when you pull that trigger think of me and you

oh its a wonderful day
 
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