what you think of my lyrics?

Cara Mason

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my turn lets see what ya'll think of my lyrics, be honest

"so many things that I can't figure out right now, you promised me that you'd be everything to me
my patience dies, but you cant be here all the time

chorus
make up your mind do I mean anything to you, but I still try to hold you tight until i cry
silent words speak I can see it in your eyes your empathy, you're there to heal me when I bleed,

the fear in me, distrusting everyone I see, I hitch a ride, everywhere I go I seem to hide
my jealousy, you're perfect in every single way

chorus
make up your mind do I mean anything to you, but I still try to hold you tight until i cry
silent words speak I can see it in your eyes unfolding me, are you still with me when you leave."
yes I do have a tune for it, I play the song with my guitar
ja77, LOL thats funny, "sunshine on my shoulders makes me happyyyyy" *then the singer gets punched in the face* but anyway I just write what I feel, I don't think it would be a hit, maybe it would of been if I made it when nirvana was popular
 
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