What would be a good Headline for this Feature Article?

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Kathleen Alison

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confused, your lead is about biking but you said the feature is about routes. Your lead says nothing about routes. Maybe it would be more appropriate to say something like, Winding roads with spectacular views of the sea might attract one person, while another might prefer to ride in the country with livestock grazing in the fields nearby. Whatever your preference, cyclists have myriad choices of where to ride that bike in 2009. something like that
 
Okay so I was wondering if you guys could help me out, and give me an idea for a Headline.

I did a feature article on Biking Routes and here's the lead:

Would you like to get away and exercise, while enjoying a beautiful view? Well, then experiencing the fun challenges of mountain biking is for you!

All help is greatly appreciated!
Thanks!

btw the lead isn't complete yet. lol
 
confused, your lead is about biking but you said the feature is about routes. Your lead says nothing about routes. Maybe it would be more appropriate to say something like, Winding roads with spectacular views of the sea might attract one person, while another might prefer to ride in the country with livestock grazing in the fields nearby. Whatever your preference, cyclists have myriad choices of where to ride that bike in 2009. something like that
 
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