...college? please help? hello all. I am in dire need of a great appeal letter for the college i attend. I was awarded financial aide 3 years ago. My first year was great! passed with all A's (taking 18 credited hrs) my second semester wasn't as good, My daughters kidneys gave out. i was put on probation (financial aid). The fall of the next semester (i dropped to part time) my health failed. I have horrible IBS. I would attempt to attend class, and have an accident on my self. or have such stomach pain that i would excuse my self and cry (they felt like contractions) I live with the incontinence almost every day. but i have attempted to stay in school with out financial aide for the last 3 part time semesters. I have paid for every class book room boarding on my OWN! I now have an academic hold stating that i have attempted max credited hrs. yes i failed some (due to health problems) and yes i have passed some, (thank GOD) I just need financial aid back this year because i have no money to cover classes on my own, I want to sound sincere, honest and truly worthy of the award i am given. Writing isn't my strongest subject, please help me!